Positives: You have stuck to your three colour scheme, Your images are positioned very well and are bright and clear. You have used different shapes to position everything neatly.
Recommendations for improvement: The only thing I would say is that in the DPS, you should space the writing a bit so that it is easier to read.
I like the final outcome of your magazine as you have managed to stick to the colour scheme throughout the 3 pages. The layout of your contents page looks professional and you have positioned the images well. One thing that could be improved it's making the text for the DPS more clear to read as it is sorta squashed together.
your three pages are very appealing especially the main cover as it contains all the conventions that grabs the readers attention. your content page is very easy to follow and contains a variety of images. the journalism is great as it gives an amazing outline of the artists career story.
Your photography skills is a strong point which makes your magazine pages and cover more interesting and helps it stand out. Your colour scheme is consistent and works well with the whole concept of your magazine. To improve you could have thought about the layout of your DPS as page 9 has a huge content of writing without any images or pull quotes on that page.
Positives: You have stuck to your three colour scheme, Your images are positioned very well and are bright and clear. You have used different shapes to position everything neatly.
ReplyDeleteRecommendations for improvement: The only thing I would say is that in the DPS, you should space the writing a bit so that it is easier to read.
I like the final outcome of your magazine as you have managed to stick to the colour scheme throughout the 3 pages. The layout of your contents page looks professional and you have positioned the images well. One thing that could be improved it's making the text for the DPS more clear to read as it is sorta squashed together.
ReplyDeleteyour three pages are very appealing especially the main cover as it contains all the conventions that grabs the readers attention.
ReplyDeleteyour content page is very easy to follow and contains a variety of images.
the journalism is great as it gives an amazing outline of the artists career story.
Your photography skills is a strong point which makes your magazine pages and cover more interesting and helps it stand out. Your colour scheme is consistent and works well with the whole concept of your magazine. To improve you could have thought about the layout of your DPS as page 9 has a huge content of writing without any images or pull quotes on that page.
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